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re: The Rating System  unknown  23 Aug 08 7:48AM Thread Closed

i agree

artistes are inexhaustively proud


st3ntorian

re: The Rating System  unknown  23 Aug 08 11:34AM Thread Closed

Well I just guess they are.

A Sonnet Ballade.

O’ my words they are dying, o they’re truly dying
and I am left all alone in repose.
Where is my wild nature, that devil its creature
for I am left with those that he knows.

It seems that there’s sorrow in that life of tomorrow
when problem’s paths they a red river flow
What steps can I take in that poetry’s great sorrow
and all of its wisdom’s I were ne’er to know.

So write me a story of death and its glory
that I may scrawl on last page of life
of all those great words that did so escape me
they of a meaning and their own causing strife.

When all of those words are gone from my memory
and the last page I wrote I may no longer see.

re: The Rating System  unknown  25 Aug 08 11:08AM Thread Closed

> Well I just guess they are.
>
> A Sonnet Ballade.
>
> O’ my words they are dying, o they’re truly dying
> and I am left all alone in repose.
> Where is my wild nature, that devil its creature
> for I am left with those that he knows.
>
> It seems that there’s sorrow in that life of tomorrow
> when problem’s paths they a red river flow
> What steps can I take in that poetry’s great sorrow
> and all of its wisdom’s I were ne’er to know.
>
> So write me a story of death and its glory
> that I may scrawl on last page of life
> of all those great words that did so escape me
> they of a meaning and their own causing strife.
>
> When all of those words are gone from my memory
> and the last page I wrote I may no longer see.

fucking boring

re: The Rating System  unknown  25 Aug 08 11:37AM Thread Closed

Never mind so are you.

re: The Rating System  unknown  26 Aug 08 3:20AM Thread Closed

> Never mind so are you.

Are you mor's sound hole, or his Glory Hole, or just mor the fucking cliche shit scribbler?

re: The Rating System  trochee  26 Aug 08 3:31AM Thread Closed

what a bunch of monkey bones...

re: The Rating System  unknown  26 Aug 08 3:55AM Thread Closed

> > Never mind so are you.
>
> Are you mor's sound hole, or his Glory Hole, or just mor the fucking
> cliche shit scribbler?

He is definitely not mongrol that’s for sure, now he is a real load of monkey shit pretty much like yourself..

re: The Rating System  unknown  26 Aug 08 6:59PM Thread Closed

> He is definitely not mongrol that’s for sure


Damn fucking right! Mongrol has talent, mor is a talentless wankstain.
Getting the fucking picture anonymous mor?

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