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re: oh, well  AlchemiA  21 Aug 08 8:51PM Thread Closed

> Joey,
> Maybe I'm still too new around here to be commenting on this-
> there's obviously a lot of history going on from before I started
> visiting here. But I have to agree with a comment about you that I
> read the other day; if you left, there would be a big empty space
> where you were.  I guess we all need a break from time to time, but
> please don't stay away too long.

ditto SilverGirl

re: oh, well  starr  21 Aug 08 9:12PM Thread Closed

What the FUCK?!  Though I don't understand much of what you tell me, I do try and pick out the more coherent parts of your ramblings and actually apply them.  Besides, you're the first one who favorited my "Gentle Head of Summer" and I love you for that.  So...break if u must, but personally, I'd stick around and piss more people off.  It's fun being a pink and blue polka-dotted Himalayan yak that feeds off of surround-sound toasters.  See?  That's what you sound like to me.  Stay and play, man.    :-)

re: oh, well  unknown  21 Aug 08 10:34PM Thread Closed

More of joey=mor=Mongrol=fractalcore=netskyIam=DeformedLion troll cry for attention. If you are going to leave, just go. Move on. Good luck and fare thee well.

re: oh, well  unknown  22 Aug 08 5:11AM Thread Closed

> More of joey=mor=Mongrol=fractalcore=netskyIam=DeformedLion troll cry
> for attention. If you are going to leave, just go. Move on. Good luck
> and fare thee well.

I'm surprised by the general love-in; this seems like a more accurate response. Yes, there'll be a void if he goes, but I think that's more due to the fact that he shoved himself in and everything had to move aside to deal with him. I won't be upset to see an absence of posts by joey or about joey - not that there's anything wrong with prolificness, but hardheaded prolificness (which is too abundant in this case) just gets aggravating. That was always the problem I had with Morchuis; joey came and was the same thing with a different writing style, a similar obsessive 'must post'/'must own the thread and deny actual discourse about the subject, because everyone else is wrong' quality, and less esoteric insults.

He'll be back, of course, because how can you leave? Especially if you've written your goodbye; you've got to come and see all the responses to your goodbye! And if you're looking at those responses, well, you might as well look at some other posts, and well, how can you let this go unresponded to.... Same old, same old. If you're going to go, just go, indeed, and spare us the drama for once. If you're going to take a vacation, just do it; it's not like you need to make sure that someone here collects your mail and turns on the lights every now and then to make it look like someone's home. Burglars will not come in and rob poetry critical in your absence.

re: oh, well  Mongrol  22 Aug 08 5:17AM Thread Closed

> I'm surprised by the general love-in

*shrug* hmmm seems a human thing to me :)

disparate and electronically distanced peoples with their own unique experiences and voices online and sharing them in (hopefully) a peotic form, or blather on the forum ;)...  to make or take anything too personally, beyond the slightly rippled surface of the PC lake is a mistake imo... joey has his voice, as much as Net or Moribund has come to that, and nothing is worth anything more than the value you (general you) make or take from it..

~ Mong

re: oh, well  unknown  22 Aug 08 5:20AM Thread Closed

Now back to the love-in.
Mor is an archaic pedantic. Joey is a poet. The difference is that simple. I don't always agree with Joey, but his passion has affected how I write (and read). He was the main reason that I visited from time to time.

re: oh, well  unknown  22 Aug 08 5:20AM Thread Closed

hahahahaha   ahhh i think i peed myself.

that was the funniest and truest post anyone has ever written. thank you, unknown.


> > More of joey=mor=Mongrol=fractalcore=netskyIam=DeformedLion troll
> cry
> > for attention. If you are going to leave, just go. Move on. Good
> luck
> > and fare thee well.
>
> I'm surprised by the general love-in; this seems like a more accurate
> response. Yes, there'll be a void if he goes, but I think that's
> more due to the fact that he shoved himself in and everything had to
> move aside to deal with him. I won't be upset to see an absence of
> posts by joey or about joey - not that there's anything wrong with
> prolificness, but hardheaded prolificness (which is too abundant in
> this case) just gets aggravating. That was always the problem I had
> with Morchuis; joey came and was the same thing with a different
> writing style, a similar obsessive 'must post'/'must own the thread
> and deny actual discourse about the subject, because everyone else is
> wrong' quality, and less esoteric insults.
>
> He'll be back, of course, because how can you leave? Especially if
> you've written your goodbye; you've got to come and see all the
> responses to your goodbye! And if you're looking at those responses,
> well, you might as well look at some other posts, and well, how can
> you let this go unresponded to.... Same old, same old. If you're
> going to go, just go, indeed, and spare us the drama for once. If
> you're going to take a vacation, just do it; it's not like you need
> to make sure that someone here collects your mail and turns on the
> lights every now and then to make it look like someone's home.
> Burglars will not come in and rob poetry critical in your absence.

re: oh, well  unknown  22 Aug 08 9:24AM Thread Closed

No No No
mor=joey
He/they is a pedantic poet.
Lets hope they have the dignity to stay away.
They bully and bump poems with their inane comments.
There is a big difference between being critical and being obnoxious.

re: oh, well  unknown  22 Aug 08 11:02AM Thread Closed

> No No No
> mor=joey
> He/they is a pedantic poet.
> Lets hope they have the dignity to stay away.
> They bully and bump poems with their inane comments.
> There is a big difference between being critical and being obnoxious.

To mongrol I guess

And those little puppy dogs who yapp all day
I truly wish that they too would go away.
Like the mongrol’s who howl insane at the moon
and shit on the carpet each afternoon.
If only they would not piss on the wall paper too.
which PC poet would fit they a better shoe
and be like the paper that we hang in the loo
I guess when truth is known - it is really you..

re: oh, well  netskyIam  22 Aug 08 11:27AM Thread Closed

re oh well!  That was an entirely refreshing essay:

"Same old, same old. If you're going to go, just go, indeed..."

Indood I deed my doody here to musicwords and Mor.
And if my lights are left half on, anyone here, please punch them out.
And if any burglars steal my name,  stop them with "why the fuck would you want to be him?"

You know why I make so many posts here lately, people?  It's because I have no life otherwise, rallly (lolz, tru)

And I like to have a lot of posts at the ready just in case horse traders come to PC Gulch and need to tie off their nags.

~ ~
  "

(that's my Paul Whiteman avatar above, only without snoozy music)

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