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| re: Improve this sentence? unknown 21 Aug 08 3:20PM | Thread Closed |
> > > I wish that I could wait on with thee
> > > down by the briny sea.
> > > Where ships they sail o’er oceans so wide
> > > and I must hide from me.
> > >
> > > It was but of a laughter’s form
> > > that nature gave a peace
> > > and all those steps that I perform
> > > are but a soul’s release.
> >
> > So beat the wave and tack the wind
> > lest let all its sense avail.
> > When you are all but homeward bound
> > let its mercy fill the sail.
> >
> > For the wind it blows like seasons change
> > and danger lies where ere it range.
> > Whilst I wait on that shore so bare
> > and mornings light is so lonely there..
>
> For the silhouette on that silver sea
> gives hope that it may be of thee.
> When they tall ships sail up the Tyne
> I know that all those joys are mine.
> and all of those sad leavings so
> are dead where all sad thoughts they go.
I wait upon the quayside there
what hopes could I declare?
it was but of my love’s despair
I would my soul so share.
For there it is in fractured bliss
what tenure would I care
I need it more much more than this
true love I do prepare...
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| re: Improve this sentence? Mongrol 21 Aug 08 6:59PM | Thread Closed |
> It is only dumb ass school kids who use meter in the UK the arts have
> always favoured metre much as they do in sport.
> I have two medals both inscribed to me in recognition of my winning
> races of both five thousand and ten thousand metres. I wonder why such
> an august authority should make such a mistake maybe you should write
> and tell them of your wonderful knowledge.
> Of course I did win them long before you were born little boy.
Liar. You have no medals and have done nothing of note ever. You obviously need this repeated to you, as for some reason you are intellectually retarded on this subject. It's almost a crime you using the words 'the arts' in a sentence as you are quite the talentless fraud.
Metre is for measuring space, and notation. Meter is the rhythm/tempo of the structure when use in poetic verse.
Though you fixation with me as a little boy is a bit worrying, i wonder what 'stick' you'd like to measure me with on that score. 'shudder'...
Stop lying mor... the only 'august' body that would accept you or reward you would be the Village Idiots Society.
~ Mong
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| re: Improve this sentence? unknown 21 Aug 08 7:00PM | Thread Closed |
> For the silhouette on that silver sea
> gives hope that it may be of thee.
> When they tall ships sail up the Tyne
> I know that all those joys are mine.
> and all of those sad leavings so
> are dead where all sad thoughts they go.
yawwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnn fucking boring
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| re: Improve this sentence? netskyIam 21 Aug 08 7:36PM | Thread Closed |
> > For the silhouette on that silver sea
> > gives hope that it may be of thee.
> > When they tall ships sail up the Tyne
> > I know that all those joys are mine.
> > and all of those sad leavings so
> > are dead where all sad thoughts they go.
On the contrary, I find it very good;
pure poetry, beauty in formal thought
and word; the essence of truth, inclined
in cultured pose
and gallantry
we don't see much today.
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