| LINK here your shortest but best poem? netskyIam 4 Sep 08 12:03AM | Thread Closed |
The shorter the better. The title often works as a line of the poem.
Example, because, "offensive" as this is to prigs, it's just so perfect.
Oscar Wilde smiles for our Rask:
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/50491/
You bet I favorite it. Add a link to YOUR best shorty-short.
THIS is NOT a competition. It's a resource thread.
The shorty poem need not be dirty or funny, but for gosh sake, it should make sense to sane pimples like myself.
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? trochee 4 Sep 08 2:04AM | Thread Closed |
http://poetrycritical.net/read/47144/
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? sir_I_clan 4 Sep 08 4:32AM | Thread Closed |
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/41212/
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? chuckle_s 4 Sep 08 5:02AM | Thread Closed |
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/41061/
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? markfelician 4 Sep 08 5:25AM | Thread Closed |
this one has no link.
Observateur
Light.
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Clouds in arabesque position, craving your,
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Attention.
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Pause.
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Vivid capture of your face, mocking the,
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Beautifuls.
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? chuckle_s 4 Sep 08 5:27AM | Thread Closed |
"shortest but best"
that wasnt fair netsky now i look more closely
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? netskyIam 4 Sep 08 5:31AM | Thread Closed |
^
Apparently it =does= has a link because it is formatted
as if it were a C&P from a PC poem.
Please, folks, don't post poems here if you have a PC account.
POST A LINK.
We can't crit poems here; this is a resource-go-lookie thread and comment there,
where the poem can be revised, corrected or critted as desired.
Thanks for understanding, Mark. No comments please.
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? unknown 4 Sep 08 10:05AM | Thread Closed |
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/19750/
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? unknown 4 Sep 08 10:10AM | Thread Closed |
http://www.poetrycritical.net/read/40970/
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| re: LINK here your shortest but best poem? netskyIam 4 Sep 08 12:58PM | Thread Closed |
thanks chuckie!
thanks to you others for your latest contributions.
I will post only time to time to repeat the reminder to new visitors:
this is a link only thread. and
every worded post like mine detracts now from the thread.
so I will shut up and off for now. thank you all.
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