poetry critical

online poetry workshop

Thread

Return To Index11-20 of 31
re: THE joey free-for-all thread  joey  30 Sep 08 9:23AM Thread Closed

maybe it'd be that i'd forget the hard and word into that place. and i'm too old now for any kind of free association not involving 'that one' -- it's stupid, yes, but it's only for love now, and love is sacrifice now. 'brainless' is how it works for me, being my body, letting go. any image i have of 'fantasy' drops me immediately into shame -- the way the 'pervert' poem talks about it -- that he made me feel ashamed for loving him.

it's too heavy.

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  joey  30 Sep 08 9:29AM Thread Closed

bharam khul jaaye zaalim!

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  mr_e  30 Sep 08 12:35PM Thread Closed

joey is like a fine wine, with just a tiny little bit of piss in it.

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  mr_e  30 Sep 08 12:36PM Thread Closed

dare you drink it?

or would you deny all that good wine because of the tiniest bit of piss?

that is the question

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  unknown  30 Sep 08 12:42PM Thread Closed

lot of piss
one drop of wine.

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  joey  30 Sep 08 1:40PM Thread Closed

you sound like a jealous lover. i told you it was only for laughs.


> lot of piss
> one drop of wine.

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  Mongrol  30 Sep 08 3:13PM Thread Closed

> lot of piss
> one drop of wine.

misspell on whine?

;)

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  OKcomputer  30 Sep 08 3:45PM Thread Closed

I can vandalize this thread to death if I wanted to. It involves the letter 'H'.

It involves the letter 'H' very much.

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  joey  30 Sep 08 4:54PM Thread Closed

no way to vandalize it cause it's not a chat room or a discussion in the senior center. it's just the net and they can skip and ignore, even though they act like every post here is a personal valentine or affront. at least they've go some emotion left about something, no?


> I can vandalize this thread to death if I wanted to. It involves the
> letter 'H'.
>
> It involves the letter 'H' very much.

re: THE joey free-for-all thread  netskyIam  30 Sep 08 5:00PM Thread Closed

This is a playroom thread by design, so joey can have any say he wants, and you do the same in return.

Everybody has only so much energy to create or destroy.

OK, if you want to fill a page with "H" letters, that's fine! No harm done, no de-tracking possible here.

I myself prefer the "F" word:   FuggitFuggitFuggitFuggitFuggitFuggitabouit.

>=
(the walrus smilie)

Return To Index
Previous | 1 2 3 4 | Next


0.561s