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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here geckodrome 14 Oct 08 5:54PM | Thread Closed |
what might it be,
that we can call,
the joey clan,
when night does fall?
a hidden throng,
of fiery braves?
a den of woe,
a tweaker rave?
> =joey's pride=
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> what might
> we call a group of lions
> sated quite upon
> our forum's baby mental 'roo?
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here Mongrol 14 Oct 08 6:12PM | Thread Closed |
> maybe now getting to your real creative gesture. but it's going to
> take some very hard work to expand this one little 'i say mean' into
> an entire novel and i think you're too much of a drunk to put the
> work into it.
you sound jealous still Mikey boy... though amusing how little you know ..
ho hum ..
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here netskyIam 14 Oct 08 8:13PM | Thread Closed |
I must feed the duck! Joey, you're doing great!
Mong, you are a big old meanie troll! (joke)
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here netskyIam 14 Oct 08 8:16PM | Thread Closed |
This is going to be a toughie. Remember, reid never finished high school nor had any training before writing his first poem at his age of fifty (am 54 now)
ready? it's complicated, for sure. I understand it, but can you?
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here netskyIam 14 Oct 08 8:18PM | Thread Closed |
GHOSTLY JEERINGS
Abe's a mary in a booth
Waiting for Derringer's truth
Mary Todd with Abe no more
She's gone quite mad
And now no more
Edwin Booth, good blood of John,
Redeem my name and carry on...
You ac-tor-states-man-play-right-po-et
Shut up 'for head shats grey
Bul-let
Splat-ters ma-ter pa-ter mat-ters
Gory Ed. ward
...as King Lear.
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here netskyIam 14 Oct 08 8:24PM | Thread Closed |
It did not format correctly, though it was a simple copy and paste.
I know now: in this message board section, html tags must be closed manually,
whereas, in the poem list, every line of a poem must carry a prefixed html tag.
The next try, the poem should have two non-bolded (whispered in relation) sections:
the "Edwin Booth.." line, and the last line, for that is Lincoln, pleading.
OK try again:
GHOSTLY JEERINGS
Abe's a mary in a booth
Waiting for Derringer's truth
Mary Todd with Abe no more
She's gone quite mad
And now no more
Edwin Booth, good blood of John,
Redeem my name and carry on...
You ac-tor-states-man-play-right-po-et
Shut up 'for head shats grey
Bul-let
Splat-ters ma-ter pa-ter mat-ters
Gory Ed. ward
...as King Lear.
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here netskyIam 14 Oct 08 8:26PM | Thread Closed |
^
ugh. failed again.
Here's how it is supposed to look:
www.poetrycritical.net/read/27253/
fumbles the balls, reid
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here Mongrol 15 Oct 08 1:48AM | Thread Closed |
> Mong, you are a big old meanie troll! (joke)
only when naughty little billy goats trip trap on my lovely bridge!
;)
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here netskyIam 15 Oct 08 11:39PM | Thread Closed |
> > Mong, you are a big old meanie troll! (joke)
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> only when naughty little billy goats trip trap on my lovely bridge!
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> ;)
I know that was read to me when I was an infant. It is still there, that bit...
How does it go? Revive a fifty year-ago memory, Mongrol?
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| re: Special Thread! Mike Bauer Critiques YOUR OWN fave pomes here unknown 16 Oct 08 12:51AM | Thread Closed |
'For it is when we don't question our own actions that we are blind to the ill effects.'--We would each do well to remember these wise words.
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