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i'm scared  chuckle_s  15 Oct 08 6:12AM Thread Closed

if i comment on a poem, and say that i don't think much of it, should i be ready to be put in my place by mong? should i be prepared for all-out war?

if i comment on something, and mong disagrees, should i be ready to feel all the fires of hell being rained down upon me, for voicing my opinion?

or am i safe, because i'm not joey/gecko/mike(the new mor)?

i'm scared

re: i'm scared  Mongrol  15 Oct 08 6:27AM Thread Closed

> if i comment on a poem, and say that i don't think much of it, should
> i be ready to be put in my place by mong?

show me where i put you in your place chuck... that's not quite how it happened... don't take it personally when i was talking about the poem, as you said at the end of your comment 'whatever mong says'... as some of what you had put in your comment/crit had already been said by myself, so on the whole i was agreeing with you, except the 'nod to shakespeare' comment I have to say....  my comment after your was a hybird comment, partially including yours and partially for the reactionary and ludicrous claims that piece of writing being of 'high literate art'..

which it clearly is not...

nothing was pointed to you personally... and also show me where i disagreed directly, in words, with you, point for point on your crit...

we can post both yours and my comments concurrently if you like...

re: i'm scared  jenakajoffer  15 Oct 08 7:47AM Thread Closed

mong, you're scaring me too lately.
i miss your....quiet side?

re: i'm scared  Mongrol  15 Oct 08 8:44AM Thread Closed

> mong, you're scaring me too lately.
> i miss your....quiet side?

lol :)

that side hasn't been getting many hugs or cuddles lately :(

it's never very nice being called a Pedo by a messed up old man with a genius complex :/

still i'm sure i'll get over it ;)

re: i'm scared  raskolniikov  15 Oct 08 9:20AM Thread Closed

-mongrol-

i much prefer the savage in you.

re: i'm scared  geckodrome  15 Oct 08 9:33AM Thread Closed

that's his 'mor' personality, but he's been so challenged recently that he can't keep his game straight. he's mor-ing and mong-ing at random. neither personality really gives a writers workshop moment, but that's not what mormong wants here and he's going to tell us about his feelings about that many times and in several ways. what we get is a dialog sample and style so that we can build a character in a novel out of him. we can use him as a simple kind of guy who feels more comfortable with things he can hold in his hand, or as an estonian terrorist plotting the destruction of writers using russian authors characters as pen-names. it's a fun thing, writing a novel.


> -mongrol-
>
> i much prefer the savage in you.

re: i'm scared  Mongrol  15 Oct 08 9:39AM Thread Closed

Mike can only dream of my skills with cutting humour and caustic wit.

though a fair effort for a lamer  ;)


carpet bagging anyone?

re: i'm scared  geckodrome  15 Oct 08 9:40AM Thread Closed

this works. thanks.

re: i'm scared  Mongrol  15 Oct 08 9:40AM Thread Closed

> -mongrol-
>
> i much prefer the savage in you.


you've been looking through my net-curtains again !

re: i'm scared  Mongrol  15 Oct 08 9:40AM Thread Closed

> this works. thanks.

pleasure. now use it wisely. don't waste a drop.

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