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Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 9:28AM Thread Closed

Stumbleine - If You




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mU7yHrm8BSs

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 9:36AM Thread Closed

Swarms - T-1000





http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TwtbcaHSKwo

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 3:41PM Thread Closed

> the twist of your mouth



Have you made me stop talking unless you say so with the awesome commanding power of yours, yet?

Gosh, you must be an incredible individual if you have this sort of power :)

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  unknown  19 Mar 11 3:45PM Thread Closed

i can see how your words are reserved in psychological repression, and how you can't say what you really want to say, until someone here makes you say them. your family life should only be the inspiration for your stories, not for you public chat. you don't have the mental power to organize your thoughts that rapidly, and you write out inconsistencies and, frankly, ridiculous things. it's only when someone really good, like reid or mike, gets to you that you're allowed to say the nasty words your father made you say to him when you were alone together.


> > the twist of your mouth
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> Have you made me stop talking unless you say so with the awesome
> commanding power of yours, yet?
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> Gosh, you must be an incredible individual if you have this sort of
> power :)

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 3:47PM Thread Closed

> i can see



Obviously, you can't.

Have you made me stop talking unless you tell me I can, yet?

Have you unleashed this awesome power of yours yet?

Is it working?

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 3:49PM Thread Closed

Joy Division - She's Lost Control




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMJYXOej9f0

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  unknown  19 Mar 11 3:49PM Thread Closed

yes, it's hard, because you're not a good writer. but, reading between the lines, and seeing how you avoid reality is enough to fill in the blanks about your private life.


> > i can see
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> Obviously, you can't.
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> Have you made me stop talking unless you tell me I can, yet?
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> Have you unleashed this awesome power of yours yet?
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> Is it working?

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 3:53PM Thread Closed

Joy Division - Disorder





http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fhCLalLXHP4

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  unknown  19 Mar 11 4:01PM Thread Closed

twinkle-twinkle, little star

re: Music Corner 2 - Song-a-Day  jharrison  19 Mar 11 4:14PM Thread Closed

Chatmonchy - Bus Romance - Acoustic (Featuring Aoi YĆ«)




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x35-DSEC_qs

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