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Just desserts  onklcrispy  1 Sep 13 10:15PM Thread Closed

I know, they are waiting for 'that' punchline. No!! Begone!!
It's your joke. Don't give them that cookie.

re: Just desserts  Cerulise  1 Sep 13 10:27PM Thread Closed

Remember the buddy system: apply heimlich to anyone who chokes on their just-deserts. Otherwise, they'll be filled with sand, from their toes to their eyes.

re: Just desserts  onklcrispy  1 Sep 13 10:32PM Thread Closed

Just turn them upside down, when the last grain of sand falls, it's your turn again. You can be the shoe.

re: Just desserts  mandolyn  3 Sep 13 9:16AM Thread Closed

  
>You can be the shoe.

as long as it's not an old one

re: Just desserts  unknown  3 Sep 13 12:43PM Thread Closed

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> >You can be the shoe.
>
> as long as it's not an old one

Or a sneaker. Those are bastards.

re: Just desserts  unknown  3 Sep 13 12:51PM Thread Closed

Brothel creepers are best.

re: Just desserts  unknown  3 Sep 13 1:11PM Thread Closed

> Brothel creepers are best.


No they're not. They're ugly footwear, but then perhaps that's why they suit you.

re: Just desserts  unknown  3 Sep 13 3:17PM Thread Closed

> Lesbian Hoofers.


You seriously lack imagination.

re: Just desserts  Cerulise  3 Sep 13 3:56PM Thread Closed

> as long as it's not an old one

The rod was bent and rusty, carrying an old man of the sea into the waters so he could be swallowed by a whale.

re: Just desserts  Cerulise  3 Sep 13 3:57PM Thread Closed

...I must have just remembered the name. "Leviathan."

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