poetry critical

online poetry workshop


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the shining ones  cadmium  21 Aug 18 10:10PM Thread Closed

they lie and cheat their way through life, and they come here to get more love. they cheat out a poem, and when you call them on it, they think you're just a cheater too and that you're just being mean.

which would be ok, an entertainment, except that when you push them to find out if they have any talent at all, they say, 'it's only poetry, dude. it's about who you are and how cool assholes like you aren't'.

which, in a workshop, is kind of like your whore of a mother telling you not to think so much and get a job.

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