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Why is it that I have to count sylables every time I see a Haiku? I know that it's going to be a 5-7-5 poem, but I still count.
Oh yeah, CAPITALIZE.
Short and sweet. Me likes.
First of all, I highly, intensly disagree with leonxic. This doesn't need capitals letters. No individual word or letter in it is so important that it needs to be raised above the others - it's a poem like that. It's a poem about being in limbo, of waiting, but not even actively waiting, of just existing in a place that's not one thing but not the alternative. And you wallow. Brilliant word to use there.
Well done. I love good haiku.
I have always loved haiku.
I wouldnt add capitols either.
Wonderful! Loved it.
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