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Did you hear that we fucked?

"to be fortunate is to be dead
and to be living is unfortunate"
this is what you told me
on your death bed
only a foot away from heaven.
we've made our gods
threw your ashes out
now we're locked in ourselves!

31 Aug 04

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the title doesn't seem to fit at all.
but i like L6 a lot
 — cfaber

Must you debase City of Caterpillar so?
 — unknown