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Did you hear that we fucked?
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"to be fortunate is to be dead
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and to be living is unfortunate"
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this is what you told me
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on your death bed
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only a foot away from heaven.
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we've made our gods
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threw your ashes out
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now we're locked in ourselves!
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31 Aug 04

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threw/through?
the title doesn't seem to fit at all.
but i like L6 a lot
 — cfaber

Must you debase City of Caterpillar so?
 — unknown

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