They're going like the clappers
The Elves in Santa's shed
They only stop for pee poos
And they never go to bed
'Cos they're so busy working
On every kiddy's dream
And they will never falter
No matter how extreme
And when at last they're finished
They'll load up Santa's sled
Then tip-toe up to Rudolph
And paint his nose bright red.
9 Dec 02
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'Pee poos' is creepy. The rhyming here is really well done, but I think you just need to add a bit more content. It ends a bit too soon...
Hum. I guess I missed something. First line is awesome.
elf piss etc
Damn you Tobias Pearl!!
Bloody hell! This has two tens!! .... and there's no sign of FrChris!!!??
I'd read this to my grand-daughters but I'll change some of the words in the first stanza...very cute but is it Christmas again already?!!!!!
The first stanza is awesome!
Ah, here's FrChris now. I guess this poem is just really well-liked for it was given two tens. It's probably well-liked because it is playful. I agree with Moose too, "pee poos" is a bit creepy. There, now I've rated it.~Chris King 10/10
Thanks Chris, but the trouble is my poem still only has two tens. Have you been telling porky pies?
love your poems. can't wait to read more.
very light and cute. i love the last to lines. nice job. i dont celebrate x-mas so the meaning may be a little lost with me, but i think i get the general idea.
Thanks, folks, and Merry Xmas to All.
LOL Great Poem and so true.Santa told me when i was having a schnapps with him in the Reindeer Arms that they always retouch Rudolphs nose each Xmas
From a true believer
Larry Lapland Lark
Thanks, Larry. It's people like you that make people like me like people like you. BTW, did you get bullshit warmers again for Xmax?
Just imagine if we had two Christmases one in June And the other in January which is such a miserable month anyhow.No,it wouldn't work,you can't get the staff these days.
Larry Barbie beach xmas Lark
Merry Christmas, K!