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hank

A kingdom
 1
upon the sea
 2
domed by wind
 3
 
 
a desert isle
 4
an empty demijohn
 5
bobs incessantly
 6
 
 
rock-sun shores
 7
goats and birds
 8
its only raiment
 9
 
 
a purple cloak
 10
a thorny crown
 11
it's only payment
 12

5 Oct 04

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You used lines 1 and 2 from a differant poem called "Annabel Lee" didn't you?
 — mylifestyle

no
 — hank

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