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The Long and the Short of it
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Life feels long, in shorts.
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Much shorter, in longs.
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But prepare for the worst
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when you're wearing
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long johns.
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8 Jan 03

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Loved it. I have no idea what it means, if it means anything, but I love it anyway. It just sounds so damn good.
 — unknown

wow the best nonsense since yesterday!
 — unknown

ah, the perpetual fixation with male genitals. i'm guessing this wasn't written by a woman? :P
 — katievideo

... and it's not about male gelatins.
 — unknown

ahaha,
that's great

 — Ananke

lol, you stole that from the cat in the hat didnt you!! just kidding, haah what were you thinking when you wrote this?
 — Rsage

I was/am preparing for the worst!  :))
 — unknown

What if you wear nothing?
 — PaulBeers

You'll be disqualified.
 — unknown

Silly.
In a good way.
 — unknown

wow very nice. random, and nonsensical. just my style!
 — farahsine

this does make sense, you dumbasses... with the exception of the last three lines, lol.
 — unknown

clever.
 — listen

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