Comments:
nice. haiku or senryu?
— unknown
in a way it IS senryu, but I hesitate to call it that.
perhaps I should not label it at all...
I will adjust my title.
— aforbing
Any more comments? This has been neglected for a while... it hasn't even been rated yet.
— aforbing
Slipped past, indeed. I missed this one for almost 4 years. You wrote it the day my cat would die. One year November 30, a little feline spirit passing.
— Isabelle5
Mmmmm...Drakkar Noir. :-)
— starr
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