Comments:
Im sure your also sorry you ate my delicious plums?
— InMyBlood
Would it be more in the keeping of the feel to switch the "my" of l6 with a "your"?
Short, tinged with such checked anger. Nice.
-wendz
— unknown
but it wasn't her sculpture. it was mine.
— hank
there is no line 6
— unknown
through your window?
— gnormal
yes
— hank
love it!
— meghanmidget
A random by the same author. What are the chances? I'm sure some cleverer Unknown with an abacus or a girlfriend with ten fingers and ten toes will tell us. This is good too. Did you hit anything interesting? Was it a note of apology? It would make a good apology note.
— unknown
A good poem about anger and practicality. Simple and to the point. I like it a lot!
— wamblicante
I like your sculptures, and your poems :)
— kitkat
thanks kitty.
— hank
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