Comments:
impressive.
-love,kimboggs
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Good Advice
This is one of my favortes
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— EdwardDurden
title's fine. delete the capitalization.
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I think the title is adequate//this format demands one, and the device of using the first line is not appropriate for 2 lines...really this should just be placed for publication without a title
bring it down -what's the italianate term for that? research is good, find the musical term that catches your intent perfectly if this one doesn't
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drop an octave
get to where you're going in common time.
don't skip a beat -- & never lose the rhyme.
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Title: it sounds like it might just work
Get to where you're going in 4/4 time
Don't skip a beat so you'll never lose this rhyme
ts. ts. ts. ts. ba ba ba baa baaa bbb baaaa
I got to where I was going in quick-step time
Didn't drop a beat, and never lost the ryhme
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fun
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