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delusions over le champagne des ginger ales
Inuki

there's a bottle
 1
of tacky
 2
aspirations
 3
on the dirty blue counter
 4
Le Champagne des Ginger Ales
 5
it's bright green and gold.
 6
the pizza, raw like torn flesh
 7
burnt from the falling pillars
 8
that couldn't support the tower.
 9
 
 
China's overpopulation owing to slavery
 10
and cheap labour
 11
of minimum wage pay
 12
dripping tomato sauce
 13
on her new dress
 14
her insides spilling out.
 15
 
 
fingers numb
 16
from an emotional ice age
 17
chucking change at chulos
 18
and senoritas.
 19
 
 
the scarf of a hundred colours
 20
muting into muddy browns
 21
as everything does
 22
in the end -
 23
the accumulated years -
 24
adding up to a brawl in
 25
a pizza parlor.
 26
 
 
the Spaniards
 27
screaming of lost spices
 28
 
 
my dreams sit sterile
 29
the buzzing yellow glow
 30
of a gaudy convection light
 31
bits of topping falling through.
 32
 
 
year after year
 33
the count down to
 34
another
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words of the prodigal child:
 36
"time's up".
 37

1 Jan 05

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umm.

ginger beer is like pizza. huh.

umm.

some nice words. and umm.

hopeless shrug. connective tissue?
 — kaleidazcope

we must talk at some point. or better still you talk and i'll listen.
 — kaleidazcope

Wonderfully inventive grim poem
 — unknown

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