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the problem of giving
hank

my fingers bleed my heart
 1
goes to full extension
 2
my body exhaustion weeps
 3
and brain practiced
 4
to be fit and thoughtful
 5
hands are scared from wrapping
 6
presents, muscles knotted
 7
from dragging crosses
 8
eyes sored from absorbing ears
 9
ringing and tongue not wagging
 10
knees stiffened by crouching arms
 11
are strong from reaching
 12
lips are cracked from laughing
 13
with people are forgetful.
 14

8 Jan 05

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excellent thought. thanks thirdeyris.
 — hank

beautiful poem.
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