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What do you think?
popedogg

What an idiot!
 1
He thinks he is bad,
 2
Damn, she looks good!
 3
doot da do do....
 4
cool looking fish.
 5
I wonder if fish get thirsty?
 6
do they sleep?
 7
Whats every one staring at......
 8
what a freak out.
 9
That guy needs to see a therapist.
 10
He is really tripping out.
 11
Wow! if you separate the word therapist
 12
it spells (The rapist)
 13
Thats kind of a scary thought.
 14
Am I weird?
 15
Maybe I need a shrink.
 16
Oh well.
 17
doesn't matter.
 18
Nobody can hear what I think.
 19

19 Jan 05

Rated 8.5 (10) by 2 users.
Active (2): 7, 10
Inactive (2): 10, 10

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Comments:

hahaha.  Now we can!  This sounds like a familiar voice; slightly insane and very grounded at the same time.
 — Isabelle5

i never realized that about therapist.lol.
that is rather odd..
 — daguy4u2nv

keeps my attention. I think its funny to know what others think about
 — unknown

funny!
 — unknown

got me to laugh outloud,its cute!
 — Finewine32

VERY CREATIVE STUFF.
 — unknown

tHIS  ISN'T NOTHING YOU SHOULD READ THE OTHER POEMS ...AHUH LOL
 — unknown

yeah, try reading some poetry. I agree. this is horrible. I can imagine some little kid singing this on Barney.
 — noneisreal

It sounds like something scribbled down on paper during an acid trip.
 — imahabit

what's up with line 4?? lol
 — sassybnyss

Great poem ,highly imaginative look along the borders of mental chaos. Made me LOL and for that scores 10 and goes into my favourites
 — larrylark

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