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Short and Sweet
Rynne

There is you
 1
and there is me
 2
and that is all there needs to be.
 3
Somewhere there may be
 4
a sky
 5
or a moon or maybe
 6
someone is coming home late
 7
and his wife has
 8
left the porch light on--
 9
 
 
But you are laughing and
 10
I forget everything else.
 11

2 Feb 05

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Comments:

wow.  yeah that's it.
 — slimsoap

amazing, quite beautiful
 — tragicbubble

I like it a lot! :)
 — jneiberger

Thanks!
 — Rynne

yes

short and sweet

thank you

Sylvie Soterberg
 — unknown

good.
 — OL

Nice rhythm. I like the way you describe that the loved one is the entire world.
 — alpacas1

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