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Short and Sweet

There is you
and there is me
and that is all there needs to be.
Somewhere there may be
a sky
or a moon or maybe
someone is coming home late
and his wife has
left the porch light on--
But you are laughing and
I forget everything else.

2 Feb 05

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wow.  yeah that's it.
 — slimsoap

amazing, quite beautiful
 — tragicbubble

I like it a lot! :)
 — jneiberger

 — Rynne


short and sweet

thank you

Sylvie Soterberg
 — unknown

 — OL

Nice rhythm. I like the way you describe that the loved one is the entire world.
 — alpacas1

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