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girl
lostkid

Im falling alseep but shes pulling
 1
my sheets
 2
i want to tell her no but shes
 3
deaf i know she can hear me
 4
she just dosent want to
 5
she smoked my cigarettes and
 6
wont confess to it but her
 7
hands smell like smoke and tar
 8
she has ahstray breathe
 9
shes so full of lies and
 10
cigarette smoke shes the
 11
lonliest bitch around
 12
shes never whole she feels
 13
incomplete she wants she
 14
needs a man in her life
 15
but she denies it day in day out
 16
tries to keep busy with all she
 17
can she lures you in and spits
 18
you out when she gets bored
 19
shes so lonley and so scared
 20
but she hides it behind her
 21
bitch face
 22
she will get places before this
 23
shit world falls apart .
 24

for one girl in particular but for all the girls at the
same time

18 Feb 05

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really good! i had to read it 3 times to completely understand it and it's a little hard to follow but other than that, good job. I can relate to that girl.
 — unknown

I love this and great use of spelling and grammatical changes . . . yet, for me, it flows.  
I was caught by the beginning and then, lines 18-20 - nice imagery
Great job
 — slancho

good poem gilbert...hurry up and get on so u can read my "just me" poem..afterall it is dedicated to u!!...
 — crazy

This.  Is.  Fantastic.  Good flow.
 — WordsAndMe

This is absolutely beautiful.
 — OKcomputer

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