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intentionally derailed train of thought

She hops from relationship to relationship	1
as I hop on my own sanity	2

5 Mar 05

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i like it, though it is a little quick

like a driveby shooting
or a flash of light

brights against your lids
— tragicbubble

This is good. There's not much to say about it. But i do like it.
— Delicatelie

there is a line outside the door of whore
as my sanity unravels for her

she goes through each one
and leaves me insane

yours is a very good poesy...that above is just what i first thought...
— unknown

Very good
— marieF

i love it. simple, yet so clear.
— photobooth

tragicbubble explained the feeling perfectly.
— photobooth

i mightt get it but than i don't you know lol
— cheerchick

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