|discourse to self
stuck right now wasting my time
one, two hours of sparks, no flame
a luna? a sol? c'mon get outta here
go back to bold
back to soul and aggression
out of the head and into
light texture form all a self portrait
carve out a plate for yourself
go cut just to cut
cut just because it brings ideas
better than thinking
hum and whisper
direction from no direction.
8 Mar 05
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It's good to have a place to go. I like this. It has an honest masculinity, a little too cool sounding but you know it and admit it. The quagmire of a people without a true spirituality rooted in the depths of connection to the land, its real spirits, and one another.
5 i believe you could play more with this line, or the line could play more with peoples heads.
this could be applied to writing
testosterone filled and looking to break out (of the kitchen, banality, the crrpy boring existence called life...). Man-poetry looking to re-take its **L*
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