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Text Away II
EdwardDurden

Scary night of evening plight,
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the dreams and nightmares at a dual.
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The thunder clashes the champion's name
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and darkness presses on minds to claim.
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As mist appears, the spirits rise
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and moonlight shadows dance true lies.
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10 Mar 05

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scary dreams press shadow lies
thunder moonlight appears
in a champion's nighmare
as true dance is revealed
in the form of naked breakdancing twister
 — Vonnegutman

yep, moneylove in a handbasket
 — Vonnegutman

lovely
 — SpunHeart

i meant that my version was moneylove...
 — Vonnegutman

.
 — EdwardDurden

I like it.  It's a pleasure to read.
 — TypicalMe
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