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ten taunshod ftfiy
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He cmibeld trhugoh my wdnoiw
 1
[lkie wehn we wree ynogeur and had to]
 2
"Hey sinhunse eeys, I've shomnietg to say."
 3
[I neevr urtneodsod tihs nkaimcne, as my eeys are geren]
 4
 
 
"I hraed the msot azmnaig snog."
 5
[He's hraed ten taunshod ftfiy of toshe]
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"I lvoe you mroe tahn aynnoe scine or boefre."
 7
[He qtueod, lnaiveg me selshpescs.]
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Tehn I phuesd him bcak out taht wdnoiw.
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17 Mar 05

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why'd you mix up the letters?

its still readable, i just don't get why you did it.
 — unknown

me
 — root

why not?
 — unknown

i lkie tihs pome. ti mdae me simle.

-moodlenam
 — unknown

The mixed up letters are a symbol of the relationship..
 — unknown

Hehe. Nice work.
-wendz
 — unknown

ive raed suftf lkie taht B4...

but for some reason that poem was just way 2 hard 2 read u shouldn't have mixed hte letters
 — unknown

I could read it, I just didn't like it.
 — Cloudless

cute :)
 — Anachocolata

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