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ten taunshod ftfiy

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He cmibeld trhugoh my wdnoiw	1
[lkie wehn we wree ynogeur and had to]	2
"Hey sinhunse eeys, I've shomnietg to say."	3
[I neevr urtneodsod tihs nkaimcne, as my eeys are geren]	4

"I hraed the msot azmnaig snog."	5
[He's hraed ten taunshod ftfiy of toshe]	6
"I lvoe you mroe tahn aynnoe scine or boefre."	7
[He qtueod, lnaiveg me selshpescs.]	8

Tehn I phuesd him bcak out taht wdnoiw.	9

17 Mar 05

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why'd you mix up the letters?

its still readable, i just don't get why you did it.
— unknown

me
— root

why not?
— unknown

i lkie tihs pome. ti mdae me simle.

-moodlenam
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The mixed up letters are a symbol of the relationship..
— unknown

Hehe. Nice work.
-wendz
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ive raed suftf lkie taht B4...

but for some reason that poem was just way 2 hard 2 read u shouldn't have mixed hte letters
— unknown

I could read it, I just didn't like it.
— Cloudless

cute :)
— Anachocolata

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