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Musical Pews
EdwardDurden

He screamed and begged us to turn back.
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We were wrong.
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We were so
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Wrong.
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Our heads had been wrapped in a cloud of darkness,
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the clouds of smoke from the end of society obscured all vision.
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The choir behind, its raging fists bore down a march-like, cult-like chant...
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"Justice is not for you to take,
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Holy you must be.
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Listen, just listen for the bells to toll.
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The Horsemen are on their way".
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Choir, of sweet choir of pain and redemption.
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In the faint glimmer of light, we saw our leader's mighty book, weathered from use.
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From the pages cried out a young man tied to machines that make him be.
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Strum strum strum into our minds the truth of this world...and the next.
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Pluck each string, woven from experience.
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Pound the drums of pain and hope.
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Slide your fingers on beauty.
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And the congregation, afraid of such truth,
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Rocked back and forth on their pews...humming along.
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A hand went up to ask how the courage could be obtained,
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but with a glance of the fearless leader, his fist had the answer.
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It burst into flames and shone in the sky...
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nothing.
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That was the answer.
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There was a nothing, a nothing of the heart never explored.
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And all eyes turned to the wooden prancing sticks,
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warning us, preparing us
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for what would be the greatest thing the crowd had ever heard.
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As a young convert lifted his face into the light, eyes closed,
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he lifted his metal scripture, furiously flipping the pages of it.
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He's right, the crowd thought.
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Eyes closed, shivering, mind spinning, arms around their souls
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they rocked back and for in their pews...humming along.
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There is actually a song by this band I have posted on this site called "Sanitarium (Welcome Home)".  Check it out.

18 Mar 05

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take lines 14 through 16 and you can create a poem from them. This is a stream of lyrics, all right.
 — ka

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 — EdwardDurden

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