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Dagnabit!
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I don't wanna do exercises
 1
I just wanna do ma thing
 2
Ah Don't Wanna do no po-E- tree exercises
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Ah just wanna do MA THing
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Heck dickity , no damn way am doin' no scholmarm teacher EX--ER--SIGH---SES!
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I's gonna dickory do ma own dang didley THING
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YEEEEE   HAAAAAAAAAAAW!.
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!!!SHUCKKKS!!!...
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I just gone DONE ma thing!
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Mama! Where are you, mama?
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It's ma thing Mama
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I gone done it again, Mama...
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Mama!
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Yea, I been drinkin', Mama.
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Mama!
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18 Mar 05

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Stop writing. Throw away you pens and your keyboard and apply for a job at McDonalds.
 — unknown

I just SOH wish you'd written 'penis'.

:)
 — unknown

i liked this.
 — aerol

thank you, aerol.
 — unknown

gee. i like it too. it made me laugh. esp line 14.
 — noodleman

BOY!  I bet this slams REALLY well.  Nice job.
I'd tighten it up just a bit (with the physical spacing between the stanzas)
Keep up the good work.
 — aforbing

I found this whacky and very funny - L 14 is the real clincher *fav*
 — Mercedes

Practice saying: "Do you want fries with that?
 — unknown
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