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you write your poems straight into a message window?
you spell worse than i do.
remember you can't successfully write about suicide unless you've successfully committed it.
this is shallow. but you wrote. keep it up. go back. salvage the good bits.
— kaleidazcope
first off asshole, fuck you.
yea i did write into a window got a fucknig problem with that? who made up the rules of poetry?
so what if i spell wrong, big fucking deal.
did u also make up the fucking rules about suicidal thoughts? who says this is about suicide you judemental kerk off?
fuck you im not shallow, i just felt like releasing angst. you have no right to be a conceited judgemental fuck. fuck off
— infinity
gosh, kaleidazcope. be nice to the guy. he's upset. first of all, let him write about suicide if he wants to. by the way, it is impossible to write about something after you're DEAD; second of all, he doesn't say he's even talking about suicide. he just "hates" a lot of things--he has a lot of anger built up inside of him. so please take it easy. you did state some things in a more polite way, but really there shouldn't be any criticizing going on when someone is upset. i know i wouldn't want anything else bringing me down when i'm upset like that.
anyway, infinity, hope everything goes well with you.
— ducktape
despite the strong overtures of teen angst, this is really really good.
— themolly
not good at all
— unknown
0_o
What's a kerk off?
— unknown
That's sad.
It's also strangely paradoxical to read infinity typing of death.
Maybe the poem was rid by some opponent or adversary and you've got to win it back, or let it go and do your best to patiently create something equally wonderful.
Sorry to read of your misfortune. Hope you're a good person who has better coming soon. (C)
— unknown
Please don't let any evil folks typing here push you to some climax. This certainly isn't the kind of writing you tell one to keep it up. That can end up being a suicide or other serious situation, i.e. going too far, and then the commentor becomes partly responsible for it.
He obviously vented and then he was done.
Good stand infinity though I'd maybe clean up the cussing comments afterwards.
Also note: one can write about suicide from many angles. (C)
— unknown
successfully and effectively
— unknown
this is my poem
&n bsp; &nbs p; &n bsp; []D [] []V[] [] []D
Look at this crime all th fighting
&nbs p; sotp stop all the madness
; damn u all ill shoot a nuke
&n bsp;and ill blow ur ass up
=) ps the title read pimp
— unknown
You called Kaleidazcope ass-hole? Oh, my mighty Poetry god, don't ever do that!
It's hard to tell whether this was meant to be a poem or a rant. It's certainly rants and it's full of angst but the question is - Is this a spoof on the angst sometimes (often) posted here or was this actually supposed to be a poem?
If it's a spoof, good job. If it is supposed to be taken seriously as a poem, you must have missed the Exit that said, Diary Entries Here.
My humble opinion but you dissed Kaleid..gotten chew on that one.
— Isabelle5
im sorry for flipping on him a while back. at the time i wrote this i wasnt thinking straight, i just wanted to vent at the time, i ranted, i was just angry. thanks for the support, and kalid, i apolidgize, i wasnt thinking right. sometimes i just do rant poetry to get things out right away. usually i put more time, effort, and thought into poetry, but like my name is "infinity" poetry can have infinite possibilities, and thats the point i try to get across.
— infinity
hmm infinity. i think an apology was most certainly required after that little trantrum.
ducktape and (c) maybe you would both like to consider apologising to me too.
and ducktape. you seriously need to revisit your definition of nasty (and irony while you're at it)
isabelle. i think i've been gentle on them. what do you think?
— kaleidazcope
oooh, tension.
— Lia
Well the poem is what it is, it hates a lot and is full of upset words from an upset mind...
But it is written "Excuse me while I cry"
— vida
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