| summing up
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ollylama
| 1've got | 1 |
0 thing | 2 |
2 say | 3 |
2 you | 4 |
--- | 5 |
5 finger solution | 6 |
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divide by | 7 |
bye | 8 |
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30 Mar 05 |
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yeah , i get your point here, but i felt it could have been a little more effective.
i cant really think of much off the top of my head, but i think the last word should definately be "goodbye" not just "bye" because the word BEFORE that is "by", and so it doesnt read well that way.
duffy
— unknown
cute
— unknown
how about:
5 finger solution
/ by
5 = last
1 for you
— unknown
this is something i would've found humerous at 8.
— themolly
i find it humerous now and i'm 37. and i make no bones about it!
— ollylama
i tuck my thumb in.
short clever thing.
— kaleidazcope
original ollylama. does a 5 finger solution mean what i think it means?
— hank
it means waving bye bye. what did you think it meant?
— ollylama
Clever little poem, like it.
— unknown
i can see raven doin dis
woger
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