| sara (not a sarah poem)
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unknown
| all day | 1 |
i'm staring, | 2 |
staring, | 3 |
at sara's shoes. | 4 |
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just staring, | 5 |
staring, | 6 |
at sara's shoes. | 7 |
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a sign of madness | 8 |
perhaps; | 9 |
or time to buy | 10 |
some curtains. | 11 |
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24 Feb 03 |
Rated 4.5 (6.2) by 2 users.
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cute.
— unknown
to me, it's trying too hard to be cute. change the "curtains" to "sneakers"? that way, it could either be a crush on "sara" or a reminder to get new shoes. i guess i don't see the connection between curtains and shoes.
— britta
line 8 holds the clue.
— unknown
smacks of elliot.
— unknown
Funny cute.
— Lossandra
Whimsical.
— Rull
Ooh. I like it very much.
— Cella
:)
— Adrielle
ooookay...
— unknown
Love it. Nice work.
-wendz
— unknown
Love it... I get it.
— sweetascandy
Thank you all for your comments.
— unknown
Odd. And lazy? - Not a burn.
— Infrangible
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