| Like Rainbows
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themolly
| Remember me like rainbows. | 1 |
They come only just so oft. | 2 |
Remember all of my colors, | 3 |
between the hards and softs. | 4 |
Edges are curved stretches | 5 |
and trenches that drop off | 6 |
over the horizon | 7 |
an ocean for Poseidon | 8 |
all roped off. | 9 |
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Come again with new friends, | 10 |
over the vanishing point | 11 |
you won't fall off. | 12 |
We will invite you in | 13 |
with your new friends | 14 |
all colors all noises off. | 15 |
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14 Apr 05 |
Rated 7.2 (6.4) by 7 users.
Active (7): 7, 8, 10, 10, 10
Inactive (5): 1, 1, 1, 1, 7, 9, 10
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I don't want to like this, I want to tell you it's bad and something is wrong but I read it over and over and I keep ending up liking it a lot! Some of the rhyming is really over the top -oft and soft, for example - but I love the ocean for Poseidon all roped off line. I didn't think lines 10-12 fit the scheme but they do!
Nice, nice
— Isabelle5
thank you.
— themolly
maybe 'oft' is a little archaic
— unknown
I like archaic. Old school poet words are nice and nostalgic, and I'm not giving them up!
— themolly
I liked it, too.
— FangzOfFire
Very nice!!!! It makes me want to go run down a hill of flowers !! Different compared to your others
— HeidiHo
This is one of my personal favs. It came to me after becoming trance-fixed by an oily rainbow in a muddy puddle.
— themolly
YAHOOOO! This one's getting published this summer in "Eternal Portraits", a coffee table book! This will be my first hard back publication!
— themolly
Yeah Right.
— unknown
i have plenty of friends to bring this rating back up, you fucking twisted tits
— unknown
TRY IT AGAIN
— BoundFeet
wow. this is really nice. i didn't know you were this good
— tiedtoes
this doesn't sound like you at all, Cori. Still, it's lovely
— Estrella
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