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This White Flag Declares Us Lost (repost)
dmartin

Without each other,
 1
 
 
you will die
 2
                 unhappy,
 3
I will live
 4
             unsuccessful.
 5

17 Apr 05

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I wanted to dismiss as emo, but it's got a hook and I'm a sucker for minimals. I even like the wonky formatting.
 — ka

the title doesn't match the poem
which might be better without line 1.
and i find i disagree with statement.
 — kaleidazcope

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