| This White Flag Declares Us Lost (repost)
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dmartin
| Without each other, | 1 |
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you will die | 2 |
unhappy, | 3 |
I will live | 4 |
unsuccessful. | 5 |
| 17 Apr 05 |
Rated 10 (7.7) by 1 users.
Active (1): 10 Inactive (4): 4, 5, 8, 10 (define the words in this poem)
(142 more poems by this author)
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I wanted to dismiss as emo, but it's got a hook and I'm a sucker for minimals. I even like the wonky formatting. — ka
the title doesn't match the poem
which might be better without line 1.
and i find i disagree with statement. — kaleidazcope
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