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(FOTO FRIDAY 12) Mr Wispy
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Mr Wispy says -
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Hello everybody
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my name is Mr Wispy.
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Mr Wispy says -
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Beards are unhygenic
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and should only be worn
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in an emergency.
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Mr Wispy says -
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In the aquarium of life
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we must be prepared to be
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planked on.
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Mr Wispy says -
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Jelly and ice cream
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Fish and chips
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E-v-er-y-b-o-d-y
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Lick your lips.
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Mr Wispy says -
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It's been over two
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years and Iraq is still
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illegal in scrabble.
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Mr Wispy says -
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Spiro T Agnew
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did not invent the
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Spiro T Graph.
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Mr Wispy says -
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Never eat mushrooms
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that can swim faster
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than yourself.
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Mr Wispy says -
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Foto Friday 12;
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What the fuck's
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that all about?
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23 Apr 05

Rated 8.5 (7.9) by 2 users.
Active (2): 9
Inactive (7): 1, 3, 8, 8, 8, 9, 10, 10

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laugh! Godo stuff
 — ka

i giggled:

It's been over two
years and Iraq is still
illegal in scrabble.
 — youthculture

dude, mr.wispy has a posse, and ate my balls! i'm hangin with mr. wispy tonight! i fuggin love the mr.wispy!ROCK!
 — onklcrispy

i know you posted as an unknown, but please email whoever wrote this so i may thank you for making my day in person. i have printed this out and hung it up.
 — onklcrispy

tasty
 — kaleidazcope

That you have done what you have done is more than enough thanks for me, onk.  I am truly delighted for old Mr W.  With your encouragement he has burst out of agoraphobia on a thousand castors.

Thanks to all for commenting.
 — unknown

maybe I should direct this to the boards...but, what is FOTO FRIDAY?  
someone enlighten me.
 — unknown

Check out message board - 4th message down.
 — unknown

look at the boards: the naswer is right there.
 — youthculture

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 — unknown

lol it's incredible
 — Velvet

9-11 LMAO.

11-20 ROTF

hee hee hee.
 — noodleman

.
 — noodleman

Wow, I've read this before but I'm going to change my rating, you deserve a 10 not a nine. What is Foto Friday by the way?
 — Velvet

Thkx, V.   Check out the message board foe FF details.
 — unknown

This is amazingly funny. When I log it, I shall add it to my favourites--congratulations, the only non depressed poem which will be on there. ^_^

You are awesome. Nine to fifteen rocks my socks off--ALL the way off.
-wendz
 — unknown

I'm still looking,W!?  Lovely puffy chesting comment though.  cheers ;)
 — unknown

I wish I knew who you were.
 — wendz

Thanks, W,  I can cope with any amount of ones now. :)
 — unknown

I still wish I knew who you were. I'd be so stoked if I'd written this.
 — unknown

i enjoyed this. good beat.
 — topop

*bump*

More people need to read this. Do you have any more I can read? This made a long Saturday at work worth it, after all.
 — wendz

Ok, W, 'cos you've been so nice:-

Here is one
I gone done earlier
I think it's great
In it's small area
A jewel indeed
Fit for any Rose
Pray silence please
Here goes ...

http://poetry.tetto.o rg/read/19097/


cheers

unk ;)
 — unknown

i love random poem
9-11 brilliant  
 — sir_I_clan

hehe*
fuck that's good
dont know whether a dash is missing in 15 or if that's intentional
also
i might suggest that 31,32 be separated from the rest for impact
cool!
merry christmas
 — chuckle_s

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