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Stain Me For Good
EdwardDurden

Time after time
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I close my eyes and
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Feel my past burn.
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I see myself, disturbed, distraught
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On my knees, body and soul,
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Covered in blood.
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My blood and of the agonizing things that attempt to devour me.
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I'm fighting for my freedom, help me Wallace.
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I'm fighting for my freedom, but the blood only dries.
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Stain me for good.
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Let me know that I have won
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So that my sleepless nights will not be in vain.
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The wind that passes me carries my darkest fears,
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But what I have just
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Felt warms the blood once more.
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Come fears, drip off my elbow into the dry desert sand or snow.
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Would you spread out your life and wipe off the blood?
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How did you do it Wallace?
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Horrid Fate! grasp me now.
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The soft-skins avoid the spoiled meat.
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But you devour all.
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Hold me in your clutches as I've never
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Felt before.
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Time after time
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I close my eyes and
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Feel my past burn.
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Burn strong, till I am no more.
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27 Apr 05

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beautiful...
 — desired_mind

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 — EdwardDurden

i like this

very moving

bravo

anyone who can write like this must

Shloopi
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