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remembrance
hank

now i'm on it
 1
now i'm beside
 2
she will not let me
 3
come inside
 4
just because
 5
you think you know
 6
doesn't mean
 7
you've had
 8
all you could
 9

28 Apr 05


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i would like to know what this means
 — bettalpha

don't think i can tell ya.
 — hank

its about loss. i guess.
 — hank

Yeah , on her stomach .
 — unknown

it's funny this is called remembrance... i was expecting more of an emily bronte-styled poem
 — sparrow

I'd be intersted if you would share your thoughts on ambition with reagrds to accepting your lot in life Hank.  Like the pom, nice one.

Meep
 — unknown

I'd be interested if you would share your thoughts on ambition with regards to accepting your lot in life Hank.  Like the poem, nice one.
 — unknown

yikes.
 — hank

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