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inaugural bowl of ice cream for the cats
Xiada

i never guessed they’d
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like it but they’re quite glad i
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chanced it anyway
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29 Apr 05

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one word: awesome.

the title alone was enough to make me full of happy things. maybe a space between ice and cream?

icecream.

ice cream.

hrr.
 — youthculture

huh. i always thought icecream was one word...
thanks!
 — Xiada

gorgeous, gorgeous. I love cats - I love ice cream. I love this little poem - it says such a lot.
 — opal

hate cats, love this
 — unknown

hmm.. icecream...
 — unknown

This is one big pussy of a poem

Larry Lark
 — larrylark

meow pussywillows
 — unknown

hey and its a haiku. thumbs up.
 — unknown

wow. this says a lot with few words--my favorite kind of poem
 — unknown

thanks for you comments. i wrote this out of apathetic inspiration during a writing break (i write grants for nonprofits)
 — Xiada

i like lickin ice cream
i like lickin pussy
i like takin chances
good pome.
 — noodleman

special...but short
-shawty
 — unknown

duh its short--its a haiku
5-7-5

:-)
 — Xiada

cute, real cute.
 — Lia

lovely, just lovely!
 — essenie

:)
 — Estrella

I have a cat who eats bits of cheese doodles!
 — wamblicante

what's a cheese doodle?
 — Xiada

mmm.... ice cream. oh and i love kitty cats too! a cheese doodle is a kind of snack/chip sort of thing. it is shaped kind of roundish and it has cheese over it. i like cheese doodles too ;-) hehe. my cousin once had a dog who tried eating everything. it tried to eat me once....(!)
 — lonelygirl

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