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virgin
hank

maybe it's gone
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that thing
 2
that thing that was tin
 3
tin that can fly in the air
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and maybe it wasn't
 5
because
 6
of the open rum bottle
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but maybe it was
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can't get on virgin
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messed up on rum
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not good for little ladies
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that rum
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for vanda

1 May 05

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this is very good.
across many planes.
the emotion is tangible
even between the lines.

must be you.
 — kaleidazcope

how'd you know?
no pun on 'planes' i would imagine.
 — hank

there were coincidences,
the timing was right
you have a good and true voice
i imagine i can be very naff sometimes.
 — kaleidazcope

what is naff?
 — hank

yes, coincidences and timing.
this poem is written to my friend and is much nicer
than the words actually said at the time.
 — hank

that naff isn't a word with two z's in

kaleidazcope
 — unknown

i know other words with two ff's. but i do need a bigger dictionary.
 — hank

no lo comprendo. although i love a good poem about booze. i must be too drunk to fathom it. maybe if i drink a bit more...
okay. i got it. it's about being too drunk to screw?
is it about olive oil?
 — ollylama

naff is short for naffarious by the way.
 — ollylama

i'm supposed to send this to a woman, she's a lawyer, nevermind.
 — hank

actually, she's a girl.
 — hank

naff is short for naffarious by the way. ****


always wanted to straddle a geek

tie im up with stinky underwear to my tobogan

are you available tonight?
 — unknown

u don't sound a v enticing prospect - think she'll b able to resist yr advances..
 — unknown

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