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hank
| maybe it's gone | 1 |
that thing | 2 |
that thing that was tin | 3 |
tin that can fly in the air | 4 |
and maybe it wasn't | 5 |
because | 6 |
of the open rum bottle | 7 |
but maybe it was | 8 |
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can't get on virgin | 9 |
messed up on rum | 10 |
not good for little ladies | 11 |
that rum | 12 |
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for vanda |
1 May 05 |
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this is very good.
across many planes.
the emotion is tangible
even between the lines.
must be you.
— kaleidazcope
how'd you know?
no pun on 'planes' i would imagine.
— hank
there were coincidences,
the timing was right
you have a good and true voice
i imagine i can be very naff sometimes.
— kaleidazcope
what is naff?
— hank
yes, coincidences and timing.
this poem is written to my friend and is much nicer
than the words actually said at the time.
— hank
that naff isn't a word with two z's in
kaleidazcope
— unknown
i know other words with two ff's. but i do need a bigger dictionary.
— hank
no lo comprendo. although i love a good poem about booze. i must be too drunk to fathom it. maybe if i drink a bit more...
okay. i got it. it's about being too drunk to screw?
is it about olive oil?
— ollylama
naff is short for naffarious by the way.
— ollylama
i'm supposed to send this to a woman, she's a lawyer, nevermind.
— hank
actually, she's a girl.
— hank
naff is short for naffarious by the way. ****
always wanted to straddle a geek
tie im up with stinky underwear to my tobogan
are you available tonight?
— unknown
u don't sound a v enticing prospect - think she'll b able to resist yr advances..
— unknown
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