|for fate and destiny with affection
i will throttle fate
that little bitch
and grab destiny
by the collar
when i get there
and smash their
conniving and contriving
followed by a kiss
the kids need reprimanding
for their devilishness
and be thanked
for their ingenuity
5 May 05
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a clever look
i was thrown for a moment, as fate (at least where i'm from) is often garbed as male
i wonder if it was in the cards that they be smashed, kissed then reprimanded ...
i've seen fate garbed as both. i think klimpt garbed fate as a she. i certainly see her as a giggling and devlish she. maybe it depends upon what we are garbed as.
kids! is kissing a reprimand?
You haven't chilled out after all.
I am scared.
the kiss is the thanking bettalpha. is that confusing?
I'd put "when I get there" after line 9.
Could there be another word for devilishness? I'd offer evil, but that might be abit strong.
and "thanks" is better grammar.
when i get there at line 9 would ruin a symmetry that i like.
thanks is nice but thanked is proper tense.
those meddling kids. i would have gotten away with it too if it wasn't for them.
who put them up to it llama?
Hank.. ur poems are incredible dude!!
love them.. love them all
[well mostly] :)
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