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show me
shakeit

short piece.

not much to say.


in the metal
 1
in the stone,
 2
suffer little
 3
stand alone.
 4
 
 
the death of love
 5
forget of care
 6
if still exists,
 7
then show me where.
 8
 
 
and when we find
 9
the ones you hold,
 10
know hardest hearts
 11
are ones of gold.
 12

10 May 05

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Although a piece of very few words it really said something. I'm not sure what it said or why I liked it, I just did!
 — RugbyChick

i really like your introduction
 — bettalpha

Neil young rules!!!!!!!!!
 — unknown

you're absolutely right, there's not much said in this.
 — unknown

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