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Insomniac92

My melody of ink
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My liquid tribute to thought
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My selfish depression
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in a few words
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My memories of tragedy
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patched with the blood of
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my poetry
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13 May 05

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it isn't ink anymore
though it looks that way, digital
black on screen.
if it were me, i'd move if
to the next line, and keep it as it is.
 — Bloodfetish

This is a beautifully short piece. It conjures up vivid images of blue ink and old paper. Well... for me, anyway. Not bad at all.
 — Deranged

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