| an unknown re(in)ference of an epic poem
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steerpike
| french in character and | 1 |
as daft as it sounds, | 2 |
instead of a lego dog, | 3 |
I opt for a dogged log. | 4 |
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rotten medullory | 5 |
rays of mush, | 6 |
bark of plastic | 7 |
soft to touch. | 8 |
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the babbling brook | 9 |
dammed to see content. | 10 |
illogical reference and rhythm dependant | 11 |
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12 Mar 03 |
Rated 6 (6.7) by 1 users.
Active (1): 6
Inactive (4): 6, 6, 8, 8
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This is very gnormal-esque, and I like it. Lines 3 and 4 are just great.
— Moose
Good to see that someone is thinking, and acting on it, nice one Moose
— steerpike
Fun.
— Lossandra
Good word choicesm good phonetic parallelism.
— RSpiers1
I think this is quite good
— steerpike
This is still quite good
— steerpike
stop commenting on your own poem!
— unknown
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