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reading lines online
is like waiting for sunshine
at a funeral
there was lots of sunshine for mersault's mother in camus' 'the outsider'
I like this. A lot.
exactly. mersault's mother. you took the words right out of my mouth. i still remember when you scrawled impulsive poetry all over a copy of the outsider (the stranger) as we drove down to ko chang from bangkok. and then when you split you gave it to me as a gift. still got it somewhere. but what the fuck does the outsider have to do with this poem?
i'm not sure if this poem makes grammatical sense but it does capture the feeling of longing and waiting in vain so i'll say "bravo." did you write it on another copy of the outsider?
Senryu, you mean. Not haiku.
olly, that was 'the fall'.
are you going to have heiny sex now?
tsk, tsk, noodle.
mmmm...makes me hungry for sushi.....
(which is japaneese...like a haiku...like this poem...get it? no? ok im done)
good poem by the way.
i wish i'd known about you sooner. your stuff is really good.
it's my turn for the long time...
I wish the title didn't tell me it was a haiku.
This is one Empty haiku.
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