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Text Away IV
EdwardDurden

I wonder if the moon shines brighter when real love is shown.
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I wonder if it shines brighter when hearts are pure.
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For if it is true, then I say to you,
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I love you.
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22 May 05

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hmm. so are these poetic text shorts?
 — kaleidazcope

aww!! cute!

(typo line 3...not sure what it's supposed to be..."if its true" maybe?  or "for it is true"?
 — woman_power

These are text messages I send to a close buddy of mine.
 — EdwardDurden

in that case nice full moon text poetry.
 — kaleidazcope

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 — EdwardDurden

i want a name wike edward dwurden

you are a vewee wucky man!

woger
 — unknown

oh Edvard Dvarden

i luff you too

Apfelwidbighorns
 — unknown

Needs to be developed more.
Larry
 — larrylark
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