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SteelAngel

a rose blooms above my pillow
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the petals in spiral in an imperfection
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that can only be described
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as lovely
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braiding down the bedside
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vines await to take hold;
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are they protecting or threatening
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this sanctuary?
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between the rose and vines
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a silver glow slips across the sheets
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and i am bathed in that light still
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of innocence
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31 May 05

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I like this poem its realy good
 — LaLa16

lovely imagry
 — Gabriella

wow this blows me away. wonderful imagery. hmm..is this about losing the big V? maybe i am wrong, do tell.
 — SweetPain

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