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Terrible Friend
greylin

I feel like a failure
 1
and a terrible friend
 2
for falling so deeply
 3
for the property of a friend.
 4
As I worked off my ass
 5
to give my friend a hope
 6
a lasting smile
 7
to make the day a new.
 8
But I feel on the path to love
 9
with the one my friend must have
 10
and sadly in return
 11
i think the love is mutual.
 12
what can I do
 13
to erase this bad thought
 14
of a mistake that was not to occur
 15
but did as hard as I tried not.
 16
Forget that I met you
 17
forget what we've shared
 18
my friend means too much
 19
though I love you much more.
 20

20 Mar 03

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"the property"? ouch.
 — unknown

i know that all too well... and not becuz i did that, my ex friend did that to me...
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I LOVE IT
 — LaLa16

i really love this!!!!!
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