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dance even with the ugly words
netskyIam

Dance With the Words
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EveryMan, dance
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to the words, with the words
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you live to
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take the words and rake them lively
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pirouette gavotte minuette rave
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the words you danced tonight
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today,
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whether NYC  London  Paris
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where-ever
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please and partner every
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parsing verbal venus
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and even
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every belle-ep-squawk
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Dance even with the ugly words
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Why the fuck not?
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they're all for you,
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always, everyway.  
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Bend them to your needs
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Tango literary violence
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but do kiss w/t/hen you can tell
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WildSymphony of words
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I sent you
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6 Jun 05

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Aww lol Merci! :)

Tis Cute! :D

-WildSymphony
 — unknown

not such a good poem, really (might even be awful)  but it came by your inspiration and it belongs to you, therefore.  thanks.  reid
 — netskyIam

:-O Its not awful!! Its cool, I love the mixture of words ;)
 — WildSymphony

makes literacy a crime
 — unknown

nice one!
 — Roz

and still he continues to comment me back when im totally being honest, and hunny its not hate, its the truth so fucking deal with it.
:) peace
 — nicolecote

I liked this one.
 — unknown

Words can change their meaning, or am I alone on this one too?
 — Meep

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