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to catherine and diderot
hank

in the end
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that is to say
 2
over a long course of time
 3
diderot
 4
it is ideas
 5
that hold more importance
 6
catherine
 7
than deeds
 8
 
 
during the fight
 9
that is to say
 10
in ones lifetime and some
 11
catherine
 12
it is actions
 13
that spawn and nourish
 14
diderot
 15
great thought
 16

9 Jun 05

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this sparkles deeply
hank
philisophical
kaleidazcope
elegantly smoking
 — unknown

thanks kal.
apologize
for being
so absent.
 — hank

Awesome peice.
 — midare

thanks. piece. peace.
 — hank

i apologise for being so absent.
 — kaleidazcope

oops. apologice.
 — hank

laughs.
you're missing festival season.
and cold guiness on the green.

there are revels this weekend and although there is no kicking the can, there will be plenty of sticks, bells, pole dancing and coconut hurling.

the poor geese will be hissing for weeks.
 — kaleidazcope

i know, i'm stuck in purgatory in ny. immigration is really flaying me. hey, 'flaying', that's a good word.
 — hank

it is.
sorry to hear immigration is still on your back.
(i'll try not to associate that image with flaying)

purgatory in ny sounds. unappealing.
so take it slow and easy tomcat.
or get a house with rollers.

ps. i still. really. like this poem. more people should read it.
i wrote a poem about picasso, it's similar and not.
no one noticed.
shrug.
 — kaleidazcope

which poem?
 — hank

You have inspired me to run round the patio in the anticipation of a great thought arriving. On second thought maybe its too early in the morning.
 — larrylark

do  you often find great thoughts on the patio?
 — hank

you had two thoughts there.
 — hank

makes no sense to me, sorry.
 — catherine

This arrived three years ago and I never even knew.  I feel late, yet relieved.  Nice pome.
 — kitkat

great thought.
 — unknown

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