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king

henry,	1

fit for a day	2
it's good to be and i	3
hail to all the horses	4

and to all six wives	5

18 Jun 05

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i got a little confused with the perspective change from l2 to l3-4 ('henry' to 'i'). otherwise nice.
— midare

maybe it makes sense if you read it like a letter.
— hank

fit for a king,
king for a day
it's good to be the king
the king and i
hail to the king
all the horses and all the kings men
and then some.
— hank

You could be on to something here.
— unknown

It has my name in it! Now if only I had six wives and some horses. It's be practically about me. 8/10
— Henry

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